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It Isn't Supposed To Matter by ~lifeeternal13:iconlifeeternal13:





You won't speak,
But that's alright
Just leaning against you, breathing you in
It's good enough for me

Rubbing your hands on my cold feet makes me giggle
And you know it too
That's why you do it
I love and hate that about you

A little silver heart
That you placed in my hand
Cherish, it's etched into it,
Like burns on the palm of my hand

You won't speak
And it's not alright
It isn't supposed to matter
But it does
©2005-2009 ~lifeeternal13
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but it does.

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:icondisillusioned-one:
i love the repitition of the lines "It isn't supposed to matter/but it does" ... makes it read really well.

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:iconlifeeternal13:
^_^ Thank you very much.

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With a wail, you let them know you're furious, you're back.

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:icondisillusioned-one:
welcomes

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"All God does is watch us, and kill us when we get boring. We must never, ever be boring." Chuck Palahniuk
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:iconmoromaei:
This makes me feel like crying. So powerful... I don't know what to say. Great.
:iconlifeeternal13:
:( :hug: I'm sorry.

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With a wail, you let them know you're furious, you're back.

~RomanHoliday666
~shadowkeeper1327
~SweetCantarella
~DigiZombie-Thing
~Pyroinsomniac3
:iconmoromaei:
Dont be. It's a fantastic poem.
:icongodshapedhole:
Painful, yet perfect. Beautiful.
:iconlifeeternal13:
Thank you.

--
With a wail, you let them know you're furious, you're back.

~RomanHoliday666
~shadowkeeper1327
~SweetCantarella
~DigiZombie-Thing
~Pyroinsomniac3

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